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a training of composition.plz help correct my presentation! How should parents help children to be independent? we often read on the Internet that some people rely on their parents and can't live without their parents. The English language has a vivid saying to describe this sort of situation. Such people is called" neet". When watching news, one would get angry to see that a man who is strong enough and is able to earn his living on his own play all the time and even ask his parent for money to keep his life. It's very shameful for such thing to occur in real life. We need our parents' help most of the time when we are young, but few of us be the neet. To a certain degree, such situation might caused by parents. They help arrange almost everything of their children's life, which makes them lose their directions and independence. So as to promote children's independence. Parent's should at first respect children's opinions and let them try their ideas. Then, it's also necessary to give them appropriate cares for too much love will become a rope which bind the children. What's more, giving them private zone and time will help shape their personalities. Generally, children might live in a more independent way with these advice, having positive spirit and successful futures.

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a training of composition.plz help corrects my presentation!

How should parents help children to be independent?
we often read on the Internet that some people rely on their parents and can't live without their parents. The English language has a vivid saying to describe this sort of situation. Such people are called" neet". When watching the news, one would get angry to see that a man who is strong enough and is able to earn his living on his own play all the time and even ask his parents for money to keep his life.
It's very shameful for such a thing to occur in real life. We need our parents' help most of the time when we are young, but few of us be the neet. To a certain degree, such a situation might be caused by parents. They help arrange almost everything in their children's lives, which makes them lose their directions and independence.
So as to promote children's independence. Parent's should at first respect children's opinions and let them try their ideas. Then, it's also necessary to give them appropriate care for too much love will become a rope that binds the children. What's more, giving them a private zone and time will help shape their personalities.
Generally, children might live in a more independent way with this advice, having a positive spirit and successful futures.

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