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Guns Control I know, this is a controversial topic. I'm a shooter, and guns have been part of my life since I was a kid. Most people don't understand why others like shooting with a gun. For me it is natural, because I grew up on a farm and used to hunt with my father and grandfather. But, nowadays things are different. We don't need to hunt anymore, but I still remember the good times I had with my father. I usually shoot only with airguns, what Americans call a BB gun. It is a toy, not a real gun. Our President is trying to change the law in Brazil, allowing qualified people to have a gun. Although people in general don't like guns, we had a referendum 15 year ago and the majority of the population chose the right to have one. Our three former presidents didn't obey the law and imposed strict gun control, making it impossible for an ordinary person to buy one. So it is not about guns, it is about rights. If you don't like guns, don't buy one, but keep the right to have one if you want to.

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Gun Control

I know, this is a controversial topic. I'm a shooter, and guns have been part of my life since I was a kid. Most people don't understand why people like shooting. For me it is natural, because I grew up on a farm and I (you could also just say "and used to..." no need to repeat "I") used to hunt with my father and grandfather. But, nowadays things are different. We don't need to hunt anymore, but I still remember the good times I had with my father. I usually shoot only airguns, what Americans call a BB gun. It is a toy, not a real gun.

Our President is trying to change the law in Brazil, allowing qualified people to have a gun (or "to have guns/to own guns"). Although people in general don't like guns, we had a referendum 15 year ago and the majority of the population chose the right to have one. Here is where it comes to gun control (Or "here is where gun control comes in). Our three former Presidents didn't obey the law and imposed strict gun control, making it impossible for a ordinary person to buy one.

So it is not about guns, it is about rights. If you don't like guns, don't buy one, but keep the right to have one if you want to.

Really good! Mostly just work on making it sound natural. :)
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Guns Control

I know, this is a controversycontroversal topic. I'm a shooter, and guns have been a are part of my life since I was a kid. Most of the people don't understand why people others like shooting. For me it is natural, because I grew up in on a farm and I used to hunt with my father and my grandfather. But, nowadays the things are different. We don't need to hunt anymore, but I still remember the good times I had with my father. I usually shoot only airguns, this is what Americans call a BB gun. It is a toy, not a real gun.

Our President is trying to change the law in Brazil, allowing qualified people to have a gun. Although, people in general don't like guns, we had a referendum 15 years ago and the majority of the population chose the right to have one. Here is where it comes to guns control. Ours three former P presidents didn't obey the law and imposed a strict gun control, making it impossible for an ordinary person to buy buying one.

So, it is not about guns, it is about rights. If you don't like guns, don't buy one, but keep the right to have one if you want to.
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