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Switch off your phone!!! I would like to ask this simple question to all of you . Have you ever switch off your cell phone and all your devices for at least one hour ..? Through my experience i see people , in particulary friends have the habitude to check the phone from the early morning instead of focused on preparing breakfast , or talking to family members , or doing some work . To be social online is the most important things. In addition to post your entire life is most important than to live your life . Yesterday evening i was at home , alone and all my neighbour went away. I turn off tv, phone , computer and i spent some time outside while it was raining, closing my eyes , breath the nature and focused on the silent ... I enjoyed that moment and believe i suggest you to do the same ...

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Switch off your Phone!!!
I would like to ask this simple question to all of you. Have you ever switched off your cell phone and all your devices for at least one hour? from experience I see people particularly friends have a habit of checking the phone every morning instead of focusing on preparing breakfast, or talking to family members, or doing some work. To be social online is the most important thing for them. Posting their entire life is more important than to live their lives . Yesterday evening I was at home alone and all my neighbours went away. I turned off the tv, phone and computer and I spent some time outside while it was raining, closing my eyes, breathing in the nature and focused on the silence I enjoyed that moment and believe I suggest you to do the same.

My neighbour or my neighbours, but [all my neighbours] has to be pluralised. "all" indicates it is plural neighbours. No space is needed after a comma, the comes after the comma and not the word. Like, this not , like this<---

"being in nature" or a set phrase "breathing in the nature" if specifically referring to breathing in "the fresh air of nature" or "breathing in the fresh air (of nature)" (of nature optional)

"habitude" = very few people today use that archaic word in colloquial speaking or writing.
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