Small text about my teenage hero
When I was a teenager, my hero was the character Jordan O'Neil from the movie G.I. Jane.
She was a lieutenant and was chosen to go through intensive military training in the navy because of her femininity.
During the movie, she changed her physical appearance and had to fight for equal rights. She was ridiculed, but she didn't give up.
In the movie, the character showed me that women can fight to be what we want to be and women don't have to be ugly or masculinized to be strong.
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Muito bom! The average English speaker would use "masculine" instead of "masculinized", although it is still correct. You could also omit the second "women" in the last sentence since it is clear that the second clause refers to the women mentioned in the first clause.
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