Please correct my sentences.
Writing diary reminds me of the importance of writing letters. Because I use a personal computer and mobile phone every day, it’s not many chance for me to write something by handwriting . I sometimes can’t remember some difficult Kanji and make some spelling errors in English.
Using computers and mobile phone make us convenient and widen our view. But depending deeply on them is not good for us.
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Please correct my sentences.
Writing in my diary reminds me of the importance of writing letters. Because I use a personal computer and mobile phone every day, it’s not often that I write something by hand. I sometimes can’t remember some difficult Kanji and make spelling errors in English.
Using computers and mobile phone is convenient and widens our view. But becoming dependent on them is not good for us.
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Please correct my sentences.
Writing a diary reminds me of the importance of writing letters. Because I use a personal computer and mobile phone every day, there are not many chances for me to write something by handwriting (or, "there are not many chances for me to practice my handwriting). Sometimes, I can’t remember some difficult Kanji and I make some spelling errors in English.
Using computers and mobile phones make us is convenient for us and widens our view, but depending deeply on them is not good for us.
Keep up the good work!
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