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Letter - Please correct my English Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to your article on last Sunday magazine, which named as "Historical overview of City X". I am a citizen of City X, and I found some of information you stated in the article, was incorrect. In your article, it is mentioned taht the temple of City X was build in 17th century by King Gamini. But that information is incorrect, and the correct name of the ruler is King Tissa whose command to build up the Temple in early 17th century. The magazine you managed, is an international magazine. It reads people lives everywhere in the world. Therefore it should be published correct information. Although our children studies these historical information at school. If they saw your article details, they will definitely confuse. It is my suggestion that you could correct these information by your next publication. It will be important your readers, mostly who has much interest about history of the country as well as people in City X too. Thank you for your kind attention.

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Letter - Please correct my English

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to your article on last Sunday magazine, which named as "Historical overview of City X". I am a citizen of City X, and I found some of information you stated in the article, was as incorrect.

In your article, it is mentioned taht that the temple of City X was build in 17th century by King Gamini. But that This information is incorrect, and as the correct name of the ruler is King Tissa whose commanded to the building up the Temple in early 17th century.

The magazine you managed present is as an international magazine. It is reads by people livesing everywhere in the world. Therefore it should be published correct information. Although Moreover our children studiesy these historical information facts at school. If they saw see your article details, they will be definitely confused.

It is my suggestion that you could correct these this information in by your next publication. It will be important for your readers, mostly who has ve a big much interest about in history of the country as well as people in City X too.

Thank you for your kind attention. consideration.

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