today, I went to see “Toy Story 4” (If you don’t see it yet, you shouldn’t read this message) ※If you don’t see it yet, you shouldn’t read this message I went to a movie theatre with my mother. I was

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today, I went to see “Toy Story 4” (If you don’t see it yet, you shouldn’t read this message) ※If you don’t see it yet, you shouldn’t read this message I went to a movie theatre with my mother. I was surprised at Woody’s choise in the end of movie Woody was envyful toy in series 1. but he got the best partonar “Buzz” In seeries 2, He decided to become toys in museum to aim to eternal toy loved by many people. but he came back to Andy’s home In series 3. Andy finished high school. And Andy’s toys was bring to children house by his mom. in the movie. woody looks leader. He told it is important that we are group. He was so kind and strong. And in season 4. He became toy who helps toys and child in the world be happy with Bo. I had tears my eyes for woody’ choice. I expect “Toy Story 5” in the future. but It may not be saw. I’m so sad. this movie is very important In my life. thanks woody. Buzz, and pixar staff.

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Today, I went to see “Toy Story 4” (If you haven't seen it yet, you shouldn’t read this message)

※If you haven't seen it yet, you shouldn’t read this message

I went to a movie theatre (correct British spelling. Note American spelling is 'theater') with my mother.

I was surprised with Woody’s choice in the end of movie.

Woody was envious in Toy Story 1, but he got the best partner “Buzz”.

In Toy Story 2 (alternatively: 'the second movie'), he decided to become a toy in a museum with the goal to be loved by many people, but he changed his mind and went back to Andy’s home.

In Toy Story 3 (alternatively: 'the third movie'), Andy finished high school and Andy’s toys were brought to another child's house by his mom.

In this movie, Woody is a leader. He told it is important that we are group. He was so kind and strong.

In Toy Story 4 (alternatively: 'the fourth movie'), he became the toy who helps other toys and children in the world be happy with Bo.

I had tears my eyes for woody’s choice.

Woody's choice brought tears to my eyes.

I expect “Toy Story 5” in the future, but they may not make it. This makes me sad.

This movie is very important in my life.

Thanks Woody, Buzz, and Pixar staff.

(Instead of 'Thanks', 'Thank you' is more formal)

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Note: I am also a huge fan of the Toy Story movies. If I were to re-write your entry in a more natural way. I would say the following:

I went to the movie theater with my mom.

I was surprised with Woody's decision at the end of the movie.

In Toy Story 1, Woody was envious of the new toy (Buzz Lightyear), but he ended up becoming a great partner.

In Toy Story 2, Woody was stolen by a toy collector to be put into a museum, however Woody escaped and went back to Andy's home.

In Toy Story 3, Andy finished high school and was off to college. In order to empty Andy's room, his mom took Andy's old toys to a children's day care.

In this movie, Woody took charge as a leader. He emphasized that it was important for all of Andy's toys to stick together as a group. He was very kind and strong.

In Toy Story 4, Woody became the toy who helped the other toys and children be happy together, while meeting Bo.

I hope Pixar makes a "Toy Story 5" in the future. If they do not, I will be sad.

The Toy Story series has been very influential in my life.

Thank you Woody, Buzz, and all Pixar staff.

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