Wirting Letters - [Please correct my English]
Communication is consisting of various methods from writing letters, postcards, telephone calls, SMSs, emails as well as chat rooms throughout the world. Twenty years back, writing letters was the most popular communication method. Instead of that, at present, there are many communication links and most of them have super speed. There are positive points as well as negative points on writing letters.
At past, we used to write letters to our friends and posted them through general post office. It will take two or three days to reach relevant personal. Also, we are waiting for replies form our friends and takes same time of periods. There is some pleasure to waiting for a loving or interesting reply from our loved ones. But at present, we communicated through email, SMS or chat rooms like Viber, skype. From the help of information technology, transferring messages are quick than sending letters as well as receiving replies. But there is no such a pleasure feeling like waiting for a reply.
Although, cost of writing letters is much low than cost of using online sources. For using online message sending methods, capital expenditure is huge. In other words, for sending online or offline messages, you need a mobile phone or similar device to do it. But with postal letters it is worth of few papers, envelope and stamps to sent it.
Lastly, sending letters could be enhance our creativity on behalf of our loved ones. You can draw a picture, add colors on your own and even add various fragments to your letter to make it more attractive. With online message transferring systems, you could use predetermined imogies, pictures and texts. In there, creativity is limited.
In conclusion, it is more heartfelt to writing letters but with low speed. If you are highly consciousness with speed, it is recommended to use online message sending method.
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Communication is consisting of consists of various methods from writing letters, postcards, telephone calls, SMSs, emails, as well as and even chat rooms throughout the world. Twenty years back ago, writing letters was the most popular communication method. Instead of that, at present, there are many communication links and most of them have super speed. Today, there are various ways of communicating, most of which are high-speed. (I put this additional phrase to bring together the beginning of your paragraph with your thesis.) Even though writing letters is no longer the main form communication, there are positive points as well as negative points on writing letters.
Lastly, sending letters could be enhance our a person's (I put this to keep the narrative at third-person) creativity on behalf of our loved ones. You can draw a picture, add colors on your own These include drawing pictures and adding color to various fragments of your letter can make it more attractive. [various fragments to your letter to make it more attractive] (I'm not quite sure what you mean with the sentence in red, but I tried to edit it in green). With online messaging message transferring systems, you could use predetermined imogies images, pictures, and texts. In there, There, creativity is limited.
In conclusion, it is more it can be more heartfelt to writing write letters, but with low speed it can be slow. However, if you are highly consciousness with speed, it is recommended to use online messaging. message sending method.
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