良いの弁護士
私の仕事は忙しいです。今日、一人の弁護士は私たちの会社から行くのは決めました。残念です。 彼女は親切です、良いの弁護士です。仕事はもっと忙しいので期待している。
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優秀な弁護士
私の職場の仕事は忙しいです。今日、一人の弁護士が私たちの事務所から去ることを決めました。残念です。 彼女は親切で、優秀な弁護士です。これから事務所はもっと忙しくなるので、期待していた。弁護士の職場は事務所と呼ぶのが一般的です。
>弁護士事務所
>会計士事務所
>不動産鑑定士事務所
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Thank you Dynamo! 残影 was typo - I meant to say 残念 (fixed now).
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I was trying to make a correction for these sentences but I couldn't in the end. I thought this is monologue.
''の'' is unnecessary and ''良い弁護士'' is appropriate to mean ''good lawyer'' in Japanese. Plus, I don't understand what ''残影'' means in this context. Yes ''残影'' means face, vague impression, or vestige sometimes but I don't know why this word suddenly appeared there...Is this some kinda poem? If that is the case, I can understand. Could u tell me more details or backgrounds of this sentences? Then, I can be more helpful to correct this.
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