Rainy day
Everyday I´m walking my dogs and today was cloudy, my mom arrived at home, told me that get out in these time (sorry but I couldn´t conjugate verbs). When I get out, my dogs was happy, me was happy and ... bruuuuuuuuuum! started to rain, the hailstorm was too cold and hard. I decided run at home, my dogs was scared and wet. When we arrived, we took a shower and dogs now is sleep. Today was a bad day :(
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Rainy day
Everyday I walk my dogs and today was cloudy. My mom arrived at home and told me to go outside (sorry but I couldn´t conjugate verbs). When I got out, my dogs were happy, I was happy and ... bruuuuuuuuuum! it started to rain. The hailstorm was too cold and hard. I decided run home, my dogs were scared and wet. When we arrived, we took a shower and the dogs are now asleep (you could also write "are now sleeping"). Today was a bad day :(
Very good. You only made a few small mistakes. Your English is great!!
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Rainy day
Everyday I´m going out to walk around with my dogs and today the weather was cloudy, my mom she Is arrived at home,and she told me , get out in this time (sorry but I couldn´t conjugate verbs). When I got out, my dog and me we were happy, and ... bruuuuuuuuuum! started to rain, the hailstorm was too cold and hard. I decided to run at home, my dogs was scared and wet. When we arrived, we took a shower and dogs now is sleep. Today was a bad day :(
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two dogs <3
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How many dogs do you have?
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