Sky -TAGAKI DAY 58-
(1)I enjoy looking at the sky. I think the sky is the most beautiful in the morning. The sky is also very beautiful with sunlight. What a wonderful world.
(2)My father doesn't enjoy looking at the sky. He doesn't think the sky is beautiful in winter. The sky isn't beautiful with snow. The sky is boring for him.
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Both of them thank you for taking the time to correct my notebook.
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He doesn't think the sky is beautiful in winter.
Correction:
He doesn't think the sky is beautiful in the winter.
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Looks good to me. I would just use an exclamation point with "What a wonderful world!"
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