A review “A star is born”
The film “A star is born” was directed by Bradly Cooper. It is the third remake of the same film. It starts Lady Gaga and Bradley Cooper. The film won one Oscar in category “The best song”.
The film about a famous 40-years singer who has a problem with alcohol. One evening he hear a song from 31 waitress. He fell in love with her. He invited her to the concerd and she song with him. Allly is offered from record producer and she became a star. In this time Jack has a problem with health and alcohol.
In the end Jack hans himself in the garage.
My favourite scene is their first meeting and concert.
I stranlgy recommend this lovely story to people who loves a musical.
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A review of “A star is born”
The film “A star is born” was directed by Bradly Cooper. It is the third remake of the same film. It starts stars Lady Gaga and Bradley Cooper. The film won one Oscar in category for “The best song”.
The film about a famous 40 year old singer who has a problem with alcohol. One evening he hears a song from a 31year old waitress. He fell in love with her. He invited her to the concert and she song sang with him. Allly is offered a record deal from record a producer and she became becomes a star. In At this time Jack still had a problem with his health and alcohol.
In the end Jack hans heals himself in the garage.
My favourite scene is their first meeting and concert.
I stranlgy strangly recommend this lovely story to people who loves a musicals.
** I am a native English speaker from America. Someone from the UK or another English speaking country might correct this differently. Good job! This was a great way to practice English.
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Hello Oksana, "A Star is Born" is a wonderful movie, great job with the review! I completely understood the points you were talking about. Below are just some minor details I corrected regarding the use of articles, past tense, and positioning of adjectives.
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A review “A star is born”
The film “A star is born” was directed by Bradly Cooper. It is the third remake of the same film . It starts starring Lady Gaga and Bradley Cooper. The film won one Oscar in category “The best song”. for the "best song" category.
The film is about a famous 40-years old singer who has a problem with alcohol. One evening he hears a song from a 31 year old waitress.
(typically, if the age is followed by a noun, in this case 'singer' or 'waitress', then '-s' is omitted. On the other hand, phrases like 'I am 20 years old' or 'she is 72 years old' would require the '-s')
He fell in love with her. He invited her to the concerd concert, and she song sang with him. Ally is receives(?) an offered from a record producer, and she became becomes a star. In this time, Jack has a problem with his health and alcohol.
In the end, Jack hans hangs himself in the garage.
My favourite scene is their first meeting and the concert.
I stranlgy strongly recommend this lovely story to people who loves a musicals.
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A review “A star is born”
The film “A star is born” was directed by Bradly Cooper. It is the third remake of the same film. It starred Lady Gaga and Bradley Cooper. The film won an Oscar in the category “The best song”.
The film is about a famous 40 year old singer who has a problem with alcohol. One evening he hears a song from 31 waitress (is 31 waitress a person?). He fell in love with her. He invited her to the concert and she sang with him. Ally gets an offer from a record producer and she becomes a star. By this time Jack has a problem with health and alcohol.
In the end, Jack hangs himself in the garage.
My favourite scene is their first meeting and the concert.
I strongly recommend this lovely story to people who love musicals.
A side note: In general, avoid changing between present and past tense. It is better to stay consistent across sentences.
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A review “A star is born”
The film “A star is born” was directed by Bradley Cooper. It is the third remake of the same film. It stars Lady Gaga and Bradley Cooper. The film won one Oscar in the category “The best song”.
The film is about a famous 40-year old singer who has a problem with alcohol. One evening he hears a song from sung by a waitress . He fell in love with her. He invited her to a concert and she song sang with him. Ally is offered from a job by a record producer and she becomes a star. In At this time Jack has a problem with his health and alcohol.
In the end Jack hangs himself (dies tragically is better phrasing) in the garage.
My favourite scene is their first meeting and concert.
I strongly recommend this lovely story to people who love a musical.
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A review “A star is born”
The film “A star is born” was directed by Bradly Cooper. It is the third remake of the same film. It starts Lady Gaga and Bradley Cooper. The film won one Oscar in the category “Best Song”.
The film about a famous 40-year-old singer who has a problem with alcohol. One evening he hears a song from a 31-year-old waitress. He falls in love with her. He invites her to his concert and she sings with him. Ally is offered a contract by a record producer and she becomes a star. At this time Jack has a problem with his health and alcohol.
In the end Jack hangs himself in the garage.
My favourite scene is their first meeting and concert.
I strongly recommend this lovely story to people who loves a musical.
Great job! I made a few small corrections as a native speaker but I could understand all that you meant to say. It sounds a really good film.
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