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Go to company It is a fine day today. I'm going to my company with my electric bicycle.(Or I'm driving my electric bicycle to go to the company ,Which is better?) Nanjing is a very hot city in Summer , almost every day.But it's not now.The wind is blowing on my face . I feel very comfortable. It's 9:00am ,some of people are waiting for the traffic signal on the four corners ,including me.

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Go to company

It is a fine day today. I'm going to my company with my electric bicycle.(Or I'm driving my electric bicycle to go to the company ,Which is better?) Nanjing is a very hot city in Summer , almost every day.But it's not now.The wind is blowing on my face . I feel very comfortable. It's 9:00am ,some of people are waiting for the traffic signal on the four corners ,including me.

Correction:
It is a fine day today. I'm going to ride my electric bicycle to work. Nanjing is very hot in the summer. But today, it's not very hot. I can feel the wind blowing on my face. It's comfortable. It's 09:00 AM and I am waiting for the lights to turn at the intersection. Others are waiting for the lights to turn as well.

Notes:
1. We don't "drive" bicycles. We "ride" bicycles. I know it's strange, but that's just the verb we use in English (even if it's an electric bike, or a motorcycle).
2. I dropped the word "city" from your sentence about Nanjing because it is not necessary. In English, the word "city" does not need to be added for us to understand it's a city (the one exception is New York City)
3.Four corners= intersection.
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Hi there. Well done. Here are some corrections for you, hopefully this may help you. Formal: ‘I am riding to my workplace on my electric bicycle.’ Informal: ‘I’m riding to work on my electric bike.’ Also change this sentence : ‘Some of people are waiting.....’ Correction: ‘Some people are waiting...’

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