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Smoking should be prohibite Hi everyone! Please correct me if you find mistakes. Many years in a row scientists decide a problem of smoking. Many articles was written about the dangers of smoking. And at the same time many scientists sure – smoking once a week is healthy. I’m non-smoking, but I think smoking is not as dangerous as we heard. I know many people who smoke twice or more time a day and they feel nice. But I can not help but notice if they smoke for a long time they get cough. Sometimes it seems they’re very ill. At the same time these people don’t want to stop. My friends say it help to relax. On the other hand I regular read about scientific discoveries and researches and I find more facts that smoking is dangerous. For example smoking causes oncology illness. And as I spoke – cough. Some people can’t relax without cigarette and they get nervous. It’s unhealthy for mind and psyche. One more important thing is a passive smoker. I mean people who don’t want to smoke, but they breathe cigarette smoke. Some scientist think it more dangerous than smoking people. If you passive smoker you’ll have problem with heart, vessels and lungs. Although I know these facts I think every man have right to decide what to do. We should explain why it's dangerous and we should promote healthy living, but final decision must be made by man.

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Smoking should be prohibited

Hi everyone! Please correct me if you find mistakes.

Many years ago in a row scientists discovered decide a problem of smoking is a problem. Many articles were was written about the dangers of smoking. And at the same time many scientists were sure at the time thatsmoking once a week was is healthy.
I’m a non-smoker non-smoking, but I think smoking is not as dangerous as we may have learned we heard. I know many people who smoke two times or more time a day and they feel okay. But I cannot help but notice that if they smoke for a long time they get a cough. Sometimes it seems they are they’re very ill. At the same time these people don’t want to stop. My friends say it helps them to relax.
On the other hand I regularly read about scientific discoveries and researches and I find more facts that say smoking is dangerous. For example smoking causes cancer oncology illness. And as I said before it causes a spoke – cough. Some people can’t relax without cigarette and they get nervous. It’s Smoking is unhealthy for the mind and psyche. One more important consideration thing is is a passive smoker. I mean These are people who don’t want to smoke, but they breathe secondhand cigarette smoke. Some scientists think secondhand smoke is more dangerous than firsthand smoking. smoking people. If you are a passive smoker you’ll have you may develop problems with the heart, vessels and lungs.
Although I know these facts I think every person man have has the right to decide what to do. We should explain why it's dangerous and we should promote healthy living, but the final decision must be made by the individual man.
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Hi everyone! Please correct me if you find mistakes.

Many years in a row scientists have found smoking a problem. Many articles were written about the dangers of smoking. And at the same time some scientists believe smoking once a week is healthy.
I’m non-smoking, but I think smoking is not as dangerous as we have heard. I know many people who smoke twice or more times a day and they feel ok. But I can not help but notice if they smoke for a long time they get a cough. From time to time, they become very ill. At the same time these people don’t want to stop. My friends say it helps them to relax.
On the other hand I regularly read about scientific discoveries and research and I find more facts that smoking is dangerous. For example smoking causes oncology illnesses. And as I spoke – cough. Some people can’t relax without a cigarette and they get nervous. It’s unhealthy for the mind and psyche. One more important point are passive smokers. I mean people who don’t want to smoke, but they breathe in cigarette smoke. Some scientists think it is more dangerous than people who smoke. If you're a passive smoker you’ll have problems with your heart, vessels and lungs.
Although I know these facts I think every man should have the right to decide what to do. We should explain why it's dangerous and we should promote healthy living, but the final decision must be made by man/the person..

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