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Daily Topic: A time that you had to change your plan/you changed your mind@20190707 I wanted to become a professor when I decided to join the doctorate program. From my childhood, I dreamt of being a scientist. I like teaching knowledge to students and never be afraid of presenting my own idea in front of audience. Also, I like physics very much and was good at it. I felt I could fit in Research circle very well. As soon as I attend the program, I found something changed. My professor was a strict person. Sometimes I felt so hypercritical. Therefore, it is hard to maintain a good relationship between us. You know, if you want to be a professor in future, you should get a recommendation letter from your recent professor at university. Since I found that my dream was broken, I changed the plan for my future’s career. I switched to focus on researcher position in some company. I tried hard to get a researcher offer. At first, I didn’t feel good about my new plan. But I can’t do anything. I never think that I will do the other job. One day, I received an offer from a favorite company. At that moment, I suddenly changed my mind. I totally gave up the dream. Recently, I don’t want to become a professor, but a scientist. As a young girl, I always stick to my plan. I found old people have seldom plan. Maybe they didn’t live in a peaceful era. This causes them to prepare for some uncontrollable situations flexibly instead of making plans. For me, changing plan sometimes means irresponsibility. Especially changing the plan which is needed to work with others. I feel ashamed to tell others that the plan has changed.

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Daily Topic: A time that you had to Change your Plan/You changed your Mind@20190707

I wanted to become a professor when so I decided to join the doctorate program. From my childhood on, I had dreamt of being a scientist. I like teaching knowledge to students and I am never not afraid of to presenting my own ideas in front of audience a class. Also, I like physics very much and I was good at it. I felt I could fit into the Research Circle very well.

As soon as I began attending the program, I found something had changed. My professor was a strict person. Sometimes I felt he was so hypercritical. Therefore, I found it is hard to maintain a good relationship between us. You know, if you want to be a professor in the future, you should get a recommendation letter from your recent professor at your university. Since I found that my dream was had been broken ("shattered" is a better word), I changed my career plan. (You could say "changed tac". It is a common expression indicating a change of direction) for my career in the future. future’s career.

I switched to focus on becoming a researcher. position in some company. I tried hard to get an researcher offer.

At first, I didn’t feel good about my new plan. But but I realized I can’t couldn't do anything about it. I never think thought that I will would ever do the other job.

One day, I received an offer from a one of my favorite companies. At that moment, I suddenly changed my mind. I totally gave up the dream.

Recently, I have decided that I don’t want to become a professor, but instead a scientist.

As a young girl, I decided I always needed to stick to my plans. I found old people have seldom had plans. Maybe they didn’t live in a peaceful era. This caused them to have to prepare for some uncontrollable situations flexibly and not even consider making plans.instead of making plans.

For me, changing plans sometimes means seems to be irresponsibleility. Especially changing a plan which where you are is need to work with others. I feel ashamed to tell others that the my plan has changed.
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Esther you have done well. It is an interesting topic. I have had to add some words to make it sound more natural and to flow better. Just have a look at the words I have added and see how they fit into the sentences. I have also given you a few suggestions for different words you could use such as - "change tac", dreams were "shattered". Anyway, keep up the good work!

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