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A Trip to Tibet (Speaking English) Last june my friend and i traveled to Tibet as our graduation trip. Tibet is kown as the nearst place to heaven because of its high altitude, and is also called the last piece of pure land in the word. When we got their, we were shocked byehw scenery and culture there. We have done a lot of things ther. We have gone to many famous scenis spots, temples, and palaces, like three holly lakes,Jolchang Temple and Postala palace. Tibetan meal is also very attractive and unique, buring sheep and beef are very gender, sweet barley wine. The most interesting thing there was that one afternoon i was sitting in a chair on the street and wating the local peple pilgrimaging. I just couldn't help but wonder how can these people donates all of their wealth to temples instead of using it to improve their lives. I did't figure it out, maybe that is the mysterious of Tibete and the greatness of religion. I felt very happy and exicite when i saw the magnificent natual landscapes and artificial architectures. I was also deeply attracted by the mysterious of religious culture, which makes me feel very calm and peaceful.

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A Trip to Tibet (Speaking English)

Last June my friend and I traveled to Tibet for our graduation trip. Tibet is known as the closest place to heaven because of its high altitude, and is also called the last piece of pure land in the world. When we got there, we were shocked by the scenery and culture there.

We did a lot of things there.We have gone to many famous scenic spots, temples, and palaces, like the three holly lakes: Jolchang Temple and Postala palace. Tibetan meal is also very attractive and unique. The sheep (meat?) and beef are very tender. They also had sweet Barley wine. The most interesting thing there was that one afternoon I was sitting in a chair on the street and waiting for the local people who were doing their pilgrimages. I just couldn't help but wonder how can these people donate all of their wealth to temples instead of using it to improve their lives. I couldn't figure it out, and that may be part of the mystery and greatness of the Tibet religion.


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TAKEN FROM TINA PICKFORD (ALL CREDIT TO HER, JUST ADDING A FEW CORRECTIONS =) )

A Trip to Tibet (Speaking English)

Last June my friend and I traveled to Tibet for our graduation trip. Tibet is known as the nearest place to heaven because of its high altitude, and is also called the last piece of pure land in the world. When we got there, we were shocked bye the scenery and culture there.

We did a lot of things in Tibet. We went to many famous scenic spots, temples, and palaces, like three holly lakes, Jolchang Temple and Postala palace. Tibetan food is also very attractive and unique, roast sheep and beef are very gender(?? 這句話是性別的意思), sweet and the barley wine is sweet. The most interesting thing there was that one afternoon I was sitting in a chair on the street and waiting for the local people's pilgrimage. I just couldn't help but wonder how can these people donates all of their wealth to temples instead of using it to improve their lives. I did't figure it out; maybe that is the mystery of Tibete and the greatness of religion.

I felt very happy and exicited when I saw the magnificent natural landscapes and artificial architectures. I was also deeply attracted by the mysteriousness of their religious culture, which makes me feel very calm and peaceful.
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A Trip to Tibet (Speaking English)

Last June my friend and I traveled to Tibet for our graduation trip. Tibet is known as the nearst place to heaven because of its high altitude, and is also called the last piece of pure land in the world. When we got there, we were shocked bye the scenery and culture there.

We did a lot of things in Tibet. We went to many famous scenic spots, temples, and palaces, like three holly lakes,Jolchang Temple and Postala palace. Tibetan food is also very attractive and unique, roast sheep and beef are very gender(?? 這句話是性別的意思), sweet and the barley wine is sweet. The most interesting thing there was that one afternoon i was sitting in a chair on the street and waiting for the local people's pilgrimage. I just couldn't help but wonder how can these people donates all of their wealth to temples instead of using it to improve their lives. I did't figure it out, maybe that is the mystery of Tibete and the greatness of religion.

I felt very happy and exicited when i saw the magnificent natual landscapes and artificial architectures. I was also deeply attracted by the mysteriousness of religious culture, which makes me feel very calm and peaceful.

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