Choiсе of shopping
Please, can you check my short essay.
Shopping alone and shopping with friends both have positive and negative points.
On the one hand, shopping alone is quicker because you don’t spend time chatting and it’s more independent because there is only your opinion about a choice of things that you buy.
On the other hand, shopping with friends is more fun whereas it takes longer. Also negative point about shopping alone is buying on impulse.
However, choise between alone or with friends depends on your mood. Anyway it is great pastime.
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Choiсе of shopping
Please, can you check my short essay.
Shopping alone and shopping with friends both have positive and negative aspects.
On the one hand, shopping alone is quicker because you don’t spend time chatting and it’s more independent because there is only your opinion when you are buying something.
On the other hand, shopping with friends is more fun however it takes longer. Another negative aspect of shopping alone is buying on impulse.
However, choice between shopping alone or with friends depends on your mood. Regardless, it is a great pastime.
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Choiсеs for shopping - How to shop/Shopping choices/Shopping Alone or with Friends?
Shopping alone and shopping with friends both have positive and negative points.
(There are both negatives and positives to shopping alone or shopping with friends)
On the one hand, shopping alone is quicker because you don’t spend time chatting and it’s more independent UNCLEAR because there is only your opinion about a choice of things that you buy.
Shopping alone is quicker because you don't spend time chatting and you don't have to pay attention to other people's opinions about what to buy.
On the other hand, whereas it takes longer, shopping with friends is more fun. Another negative to shopping alone is that you may be more likely to buy on impulse/more likely to do impulse shopping..
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