Could you help me correct some sentences?Thank you. Q: Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view. Keeping animals in captivity continues to be a widely concerned topic at present, just as animals themselves have become a highly debated topic these days. The debate about keeping animals in captivity tends to divide people into two camps. Their opinions are as follows. On the one hand, people feel that it is false to keep animals in captivity which will hurt the wild animals mentally and physically. For example, large wild animals belong to the nature, and they can grow well while they are brought up in the wild. Besides, the management of some zoos is far from satisfactory, which can finally do great harm to the animals. For instance, some big zoos are packed with a great number of visitors, which might result in making the animals tired of being watched. Animals need rest. Lastly, as is shown in some scientific research, the death rate of animals in captivity is higher than that in the wild. On the other hand, some people argue that keeping animals in captivity is not always bad. First, there are benefits for animals in terms of safety. Much thought has been given to hunting in contemporary society. Wild animals are overly hunted by humans, which makes the number of wild animals plunge. Bringing up animals in zoos is a good way to address this issue. Moreover, a few endangered animals can be carefully taken care of if they are fed by humans who have good command of looking after animals, such as pandas. In addition, children can benefit from the trip to the zoos as well, they will have a better understanding of their relationships between humans and animals, which makes them more caring and kind. From my standpoint, I believe that the strengths of keeping animals in captivity outweigh the weaknesses. As long as the animals have enough freedom and the zoos maintain the high standards of management, it is better to protect animals from the dangers in the wild by keeping them in captivity.