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Essay: Free education for all In the modern era, the world has seen a drastic change in the accessibility of education to everyone in most of the part of the world, while centuries ago, it was only accessible to some restricted social classes as nobility, still a lot of countries as the United States still require expensive education fees to access to education, which is in my opinion very detrimental, since it deprives societies of benefitting of a large numbers of individuals that have the potential to become creators of wealth, in addition to that, it also hinders social equality in opportunities between different persons. If education from preschool through university was not free to students, society would lose a lot of great individuals that come from poor social classes but still have the potential to become prominent in any field that requires an education, throughout history, world has been full of this kind of persons, Dalembert, a French mathematician which was an orphan, and Geber, known as the creator of the Chemistry science are great examples of that, these great scholars would never have been what they were if they didn't get a free education. Furthermore, modern countries tend to remove different social injustices between individuals, and paid education, above all, is a big inequality since it's prevent some people to benefit from the same opportunities as the other because of the impossibility of paying their education. Due to all these reasons, having a free education is a mandatory step for any society to reach social stability and equality of chances for all it individuals.

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Essay: Free education for all

In the modern era, the world has seen a drastic change in the accessibility of education to everyone in most of the part of the world; while centuries ago, it was only accessible to some restricted social classes such as nobility, . Still a lot of (many) countries, like the United States, still require expensive education fees to access to education, which is, in my opinion, very detrimental, since it deprives societies of benefitting of from a large numbers of individuals that have the potential to become creators of wealth, and in addition to that, it also hinders social equality in and opportunities between different persons people.

If education from preschool through university was not free to students, society would lose a lot of great individuals that come from poor social classes but still have the potential to become prominent in any field that requires an education. (end of sentence, too many run-on sentences!) Throughout history, the world has been full of these kind of people. Dalembert, a French mathematician who was an orphan, and Geber, known as the creator of Chemistry, are great examples of this. These great scholars would never have been what they were if they didn't get a free education.

Furthermore, modern countries tend to remove different social injustices between individuals, and paid education, above all, is a big inequality since it's preventing some people from benefiting from the same opportunities as the others because of the impossibility of paying their education.

Due to all these reasons, having a free education is a mandatory step for any society to reach social stability and equality of chances (opportunities) for all it individuals.
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Essay: Free education for all

In the modern era, the world has seen a drastic change in the accessibility of education to everyone in most of the part of the world, while centuries ago, it was only accessible to some restricted social classes as nobility, still a lot of countries as the United States still require expensive education fees to access to education, which is in my opinion very detrimental, since it deprives societies of benefitting of a large numbers of individuals that have the potential to become creators of wealth, in addition to that, it also hinders social equality in opportunities between different persons.

If education from preschool through university was not free to students, society would lose a lot of great individuals that come from poor social classes but still have the potential to become prominent in any field that requires an education, throughout history, world has been full of this kind of persons, Dalembert, a French mathematician which was an orphan, and Geber, known as the creator of the Chemistry science are great examples of that, these great scholars would never have been what they were if they didn't get a free education.

Furthermore, modern countries tend to remove different social injustices between individuals, and paid education, above all, is a big inequality since it's prevent some people to benefit from the same opportunities as the other because of the impossibility of paying their education.

Due to all these reasons, having a free education is a mandatory step for any society to reach social stability and equality of chances for all its individuals.

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