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Vicente H
Help me correct this sentence Set aside some time for your meals and accompany with music that can help you enjoy your food.

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Help me correct this sentence

Set aside some time for your meals and accompany with music that can help you enjoy your food.

okay... I'm not fully sure what you're trying to say here. This is my best guess but if I'm wrong please clarify and I'll help again. :)

Set aside some time so you don't feel rushed during your meals. Musical accompaniment can help you enjoy your food more.

If I'm right, then the meaning was mostly clear. Keep it up and keep practicing! :)
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Help me correct this sentence

Set aside some time for your meals and accompany with music that can help you enjoy your food.

Set aside some time for your meals, and accompany them with music that helps you enjoy your food.

This is grammatically correct, but I think the meaning can be made clearer like this:

Set aside time for your meals, and accompany them with music that creates a nice atmosphere.

Since creating a nice atmosphere is how music helps you enjoy your food, I think the atmosphere is a good subject to emphasize :)

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