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My name is Paola , I was born in Bogotá on November 4, 1992. I am industrial microbiologist and I have work as a quality control coordinator for 2 years.
I have 2 cats , BRownie and Menta, both were rescued.
I love traveling, in the last year I went to CDMX, Cacún, Armenia (Colombia), Panamá and Perú.
I also like practice kickboxing, arabic dance, reading, watching movies and series and spend time with my family and friends.
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My name is Paola, I was born in Bogotá on November 4, 1992. I am an industrial microbiologist and I have been working as a quality control coordinator for 2 years.
I have 2 cats. Brownie and Menta both were rescued.
I love traveling. I went to CDMX, Cacún, Armenia (Colombia), Panamá and Perú last year.
I also like to practice kickboxing, arabic dance, reading, watching movies and series and spend time with my family and friends.
I'm not English native speaker. I made some corrections based on my understanding. I hope there will be any native speaker can make some corrections. So, I can learn it as well :)
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