Could anybody check my sentece?
This weekend had a holiday on Monday. So was long weekend here in Canada. The holiday was Canada Day.
A lot of events happened. It was difficult to choose that one to go!
Saturday my husband an I made something for house. Do you know what I mean? Like stuff boring, so we went to superrmarket , than we cleaned the house, did the laundry, this things.
Sunday we went on Sidney. That one is a small city nearby Victoria. However the event wasn't funny, so we just ate there and ended up went to home.
Monday was Canada Day! The day was pleasant. We had lunch on the street fair that was happening an old car exhibition. Was amazing!
Aftherwards we left this event and headed towards the Parliament which was happening a music concert and the end we watched the fireworks.
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Could anybody check my sentece?
This weekend week had a holiday on Monday. So it was long weekend here in Canada. The holiday was Canada Day.
There were A lot of events happened. It was difficult to choose that which one to go to!
Saturday my husband and I made something for the house. Do you know what I mean? Like stuff boring boring stuff, so we went to superrmarket , than then we cleaned the house, did the laundry, this things like that.
Sunday we went on to Sidney. That one is a small city nearby Victoria. However the event wasn't funny, so we just ate there and ended up went to going home.
Monday was Canada Day! The day was pleasant. We had lunch on at the street fair that was happening at an old car exhibition. It Was amazing!
Aftherwards we left this event and headed towards the Parliament which was happening hosting a music concert and at the end we watched the fireworks.
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Could anybody check my sentences?
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This week we had a holiday on Monday, so it was a long weekend here in Canada. The holiday was Canada Day.
A lot of events were happening/were Going on. It was difficult to choose that one to go to! (So many events were going on that it was difficult to choose one to go to!)
Saturday my husband and I did some household chores. Do you know what I mean? Boring stuff: we went to the superrmarket , then we cleaned the house, did the laundry, these kinds of things.
Sunday we went to Sidney. This is a small city near Victoria. However the event we went to there wasn't fun, so we just ate there and ended up going home.
Monday was Canada Day! The day was pleasant. We had lunch at a street fair (that was happening) and went to an old car exhibition. It was amazing!
Aftherwards we left this event and headed towards the Parliament where a music concert was happening and the end we watched the fireworks.
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