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Can you check this, please? It is known that it has been planned building on the seafrom of the seaside town. What is more, they want to build facilities in order to make easier peoples lives. Mentioning thism in this essay, I will examine the arguments that address this statement. In view of this, I shall consider two of the proposed facilities. First of all, people consider sports essential in order to be on shape. Nonetheless, this would imply building volley facilities and a park. Although, it is always welcome these type of things we should consider that narrowing it to one sport may be not worth it. Secondly, another thing worth consideing is creating coffe shops and restaurants, thing that will benefit employement but will cause also more lazyness in our citizens. To sum up, having weight up both sides I consider that sport centre is by far the facility that should receive planning permission to be built.

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It is known that it has been planned building on the sea from of the seaside town. What is more, they want to build facilities in order to make peoples lives easier. Mentioning this in this essay, I will examine the arguments that address this statement. In view of this, I shall consider two of the proposed facilities.

First of all, people consider sports essential in order stay in shape or get in shape. Nonetheless, this would imply building volley facilities and a park. Although these types of things are always welcome we should consider that narrowing it to one sport may be not worth it.

Secondly, another thing worth considering is creating coffee shops and restaurants, thing that will benefit employment but will cause also more laziness in our citizens.

To sum up, having weight up both sides I consider that sport centre is by far the facility that should receive planning permission to be built.
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This is quite a difficult topic. Good work, keep it up! I wrote it how I would write something similar, if you have any questions let me know. It is known that a building has been planned on the seafront of the seaside town. What is more, they want to build facilities in oder to make peoples lives easier. In this essay, I will examine the arguments that address this statement. In view of this I shall consider two of the proposed facilities. First of all, people consider sports essential for being in shape. Therefore, this would imply building volley facilities and a park. Although these types of things are always welcome, we should consider that narrowing it down to one sport may not be worth it. Secondly, it is worth considering creating coffee shops and restaurants, which will benefit employment but will also promote a more sedentary lifestyle in our citizens. To sum up, having weighed up both sides I consider the sports centre to be by far the best facility and it should receive planning permission to be built.

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