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Does ageing population have positive or negative effects on society? With lower birth rates and death rates, plenty of nations are faced with the problem of an ageing population. This issue, in my opinion, generally has adverse impacts on society, although from some perspectives it could be beneficial to society. Older people are not as productive as younger ones, and thus, this trend may cut down the GDP (gross domestic product) within some countries. This is because young people are more capable of some jobs which require a large amount of energy and intelligence, for example, computer engineering, actuarial accounting, and artificial intelligence. As ages grow older, the people who work in such jobs may not be able to either absorb new knowledge or work overtime, and thus, fall behind the times. This means that efficiency and profitability will be lowered. Furthermore, it will endanger the whole economy. On the other hand, the steady increase of senior citizens could impose a burden on the younger generation. They do not only have to earn their livings, but also have to support their parents and even grandparents. When older people find it hard to make ends meet or need​ care because of illness, younger ones have to spend much time and energy on them. This may bring out a series of younger people, for instance, using up all the savings for curing their parents’ cancer or quitting their jobs to take care of their old parents. When these situations begin to accumulate, it will become a common problem in society that could exist in every family. However, the growth of the older population still could have a positive influence on society. In the long term, with a high demand for health care, the government will take action to improve the quality of medical services. In conclusion, the rise of older people may reduce economic growth and affect the life quality of the younger generation, while it possibly promotes the reform of the medical system.

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Does ageing population have positive or negative effects on society?

With lower birth rates and death rates, (plenty of) many nations are faced with the problem of an ageing population. This issue, in my opinion, generally has adverse impacts on society, although from some perspectives it could be beneficial to society.
Older people are not as productive as younger ones, and thus, this trend may cut down the GDP (gross domestic product) within some countries. This is because young people are more capable of some jobs which require a large amount of energy and (intelligence) knowledgability, for example, computer engineering, actuarial accounting, and artificial intelligence. As ages people grow older, (the people) those who work in such jobs may not be able to either (absorb new knowledge) retrain / re-educate or work overtime, and thus, fall behind the times. This means that efficiency and profitability will be lowered. Furthermore, it will endanger the whole economy.
On the other hand, the steady increase of senior citizens could impose a burden on the younger generation. They do not only have to earn their livings, but also have to support their parents and even grandparents. When older people find it hard to make ends meet or need​ care because of illness, younger ones have to spend much time and energy on them. This may bring out a series of younger people, for instance, using up all the savings for curing their parents’ cancer or quitting their jobs to take care of their (old) elderly parents. When these situations (begin to accumulate) occur more often, it will become a (common) widespread problem in society that could exist in every family.
(However) Nevertheless, the growth of the older population still could have a positive influence on society. In the long-term, with (a high demand for) health care in high demand, the government will take action to improve the quality of medical services.
In conclusion, the (rise of older) rising number of elderly people may reduce economic growth and a effect the life quality of the younger generation, while it possibly promotes the reform of the medical system.
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Gotcha! THANK YOU for pointing this out, Mary!
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I'd be wary about stating that, " ... young people are more capable of some jobs which require a large amount ... intelligence, " as it reads like you're saying that older people lack intelligence! You might change it to something like, "... young people are more capable of some jobs which require quickly absorbing new information" which I'm guessing is what you really meant?
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Thank you for comments! However, I don't think ageing will add to the GDP since there could be less supply of product with fewer labor force. Even though the consumption in some categories has increased, the total productivity would still decrease.
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Very nicely written on a thoughtful topic. With the advancement in technology and medicine, the lifespan of human is increasing and as a result of that ageing population(also the overall population) is increasing, which is a fact. But, the resources on the earth is constant. So, logically, we need to decrease the the birth rate or delay it. Obviously, ageing has negative effects on family but they add to the the GDP by consuming services(health care).

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