JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON July 2nd
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON July 2nd
About two days ago, I hit the mall which has a theater with huge screen, to watch a movie. This movie is new series spider man movie. Having said that, it's one of movies of Marvel Cinematic Universe. So, I am thinking that people who have seen only Spiderman directed by Sam Reimi hard to understand, because Marvel Cinematic Universe is continuing itself story even now, you know? So if when someone like said before is coming to a theater to watch this with emotional feeling, so it was like "I can't to wait to see it, it will be exciting defiantly!", and right after done this, they like "I can't understand at all..." Yeah you know, I just was imagining now, but I don't think it is easy to understand for the bigger of MCU bu any of stretch imagination. Okay, (from now on I am writing a little bit of spoiler, so watch out) This time spider man has a lot of good points, the biggest good point is picking out this actor "Jake Gyllenhaal". Yes, of course I know that he is good at acting as the person with psychopath thinking, Night crawller, which he is performing, is amazing, and also he is amazing in this movie. I have seen this movie two times, but I am dying to watch the movie again.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON July 2nd(writing about Spider-Man) About two days ago, I went to the movies at a theater with a huge screen. I saw the new Spider-Man movie. It's one of the movies of the Marvel Cinematic Universe. I think that people who have only seen the Spider-Man film directed by Sam Reimi will find it hard to understand, because Marvel Cinematic Universe is continuing itself the story even now. So if someone "I can't wait to see it, it will definitely be exciting!" Right after watching it, they may be thinking, "I couldn't understand it at all..." after watching this one. Yeah you know, I am just imagining that situation now, but I don't think it is easy to understand the bigger story lines of MCU without watching all of the movies by any of stretch imagination. Okay, (from this point on I am writing a little bit of spoiler information, so watch out!) This time Spider-Man has a lot of good points, the biggest being actor Jake Gyllenhaal. Yes of course I know that he is good at acting as the psychopath, Night crawler, and he is also amazing in this movie. I have seen this movie two times, but I am dying to watch the movie again.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON July 2nd
I would like someone to correct my diary entry (or tell me the more natural way of saying things. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I am wondering if you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON July 2nd
About two days ago, I went to the mall that has a theater with huge screen to watch a movie. The movie was the new Spider-man movie in the Marvel Cinematic Universe. So I am thinking that it may be hard for people who have seen only the Spider-man movies directed by Sam Reimi to understand. The Marvel Cinematic Universe contains continuous stories spread across many movies. So when someone who only saw Sam Reimi’s Spider-man movies says, "I can't to wait to see it! It will be definitely exciting", they may say "I didn’t understand it at all..." after watching this one. Yeah you know, I am just imagining that situation now, but I don't think it is easy to understand the bigger story lines of MCU without watching all of the movies by any of stretch imagination. Okay, (from this point on I am writing a little bit of spoiler information, so watch out) This Spider-man movie has a lot of good points, the biggest being the actor "Jake Gyllenhaal" staring in it. Yes, of course I know that he is good at acting as a person with psychopath thinking. In Night crawler, he was amazing, and in this movie he doesn’t disappoint. I’ve watched this movie twice, but I am dying to watch the movie again.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON July 2nd
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON July 2nd
About two days ago, I went to the movies at a theater with a huge screen. I saw the new Spider-Man movie. Having said that, it's one of the movies of the Marvel Cinematic Universe. So, I think that people who have only seen the Spider-Man film/movie directed by Sam Reimi will find it hard to understand, because Marvel Cinematic Universe is continuing itself the story even now, you know? (unclear what "even now" means) So if when someone like said before is coming to a theater to watch this and thinking with emotional feeling, so it was like "I can't wait to see it, it will definitely be exciting!", and right after watching it, they may be thinking, "I couldn't understand it at all..." Yeah you know, I just was imagining now, but I don't think it is easy to understand for the bigger of MCU (unclear) by any of stretch of the imagination. Okay, (from now on I am writing a little bit of a spoiler, so watch out) (better: spoiler alert!) This time Spider-Man has a lot of good points, the biggest good poinbeing actor Jake Gyllenhaa". Yes, of course I know that he is good at acting as the person with psychopath thinking, Night crawller, which he is performing, is amazing, and he is also amazing in this movie. I have seen this movie two times, but I am dying to watch the movie again.
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