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Eldest and youngsters sharing the allure of thecnology? Find how!
Could you think of the newest technological devices as a way of pushing and improving relationships between your parents and your children?
We could spend hours talking about the wide gap opened between them due to the vertiginous advance of technology. But, I would rather show you a two-pronged strategy to change that. And, that’s what I did;
Contrary to de idea of not letting children use smartphones, me personally, I bought to my mum and my son the latest one. Then, I asked to my son to teach his grandma how to use it, like that, I solved the lack of leisure time they weren’t used to share. That was the first step.
My next move was, I asked to my mom to help my son with his science project using her smartphone, delving into scientific web sites looking for information and useful scientific things.
Doing this you kill two birds with one stone, you strenthen family bonds and have somebody supervising you son’s use of internet. However, It’s important to supervise your own mother so that she doesn’t overuse or lose the point of the use of the internet!!!
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Old and Young alike sharing the allure of technology? Find out how!
Could you think of the newest technological devices as a way of pushing and improving relationships between your parents and your children?
We could spend hours talking about the wide gap opened between generations due to the rapid advance of technology, but,I would rather show you a two-pronged strategy to change that. So that’s what I did;
Contrary to the idea of not letting children use smartphones, I personally bought my mum and my son the latest ones. Then, I asked to my son to teach his grandma how to use it, like that, I had solved the lack of leisure time they previously weren’t used to sharing. That was the first step.
My next move was, to ask to my mum to help my son with his science project using her smartphone, delving into scientific web sites looking for information and useful scientific facts.
In doing this you kill two birds with one stone, you strengthen family bonds and have somebody supervising your children’s use of internet. However, It’s important to supervise your parent(s) so that they don't overuse or lose the point of the use of the internet!
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Somebody help me please. I need a correction on of my article.
We could spend hours talking about the wide gap opened between them due to the vertiginous (better: dizzy) advance of technology. But, I would rather show you a two-pronged strategy to change that. And, that’s what I did;
Contrary to de the idea of not letting children use smartphones, me personally, I bought to my mum and my son the latest one. Then, I asked to my son to teach his grandma how to use it, like that, I solved the lack of leisure time they weren’t used to share. That was the first step.
My next move was, I asked to my mom to help my son with his science project using her smartphone, delving into scientific web sites looking for information and useful scientific things.
Doing this you kill two birds with one stone, you strenthen family bonds and have somebody supervising your son’s use of internet. However, It’s important to supervise your own mother so that she doesn’t overuse or lose the point of the use of the internet!!!
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