A trip to Australia
Next month, my husband and I are going to Australia for a holiday. First, we are going to visit friends on Brisbane.We will live in their home three days.On Brisbane, we are going to go to the church on Sunday. Then we will visit the school where our friend’s children is located, because we want to learn more about local education.On Wednesday, we are going to fly to Adelaida, it is in southern Australia.We will stay in there for there days.we are going to rent an small room on Adelaide for experience the location lift.we went to know if we will adapt to local life, and learn important information about the native people of Adelaide. Because we want to standing and living in there next year,and we went to get permanent residence as soon as. We know we will have a good time on Australia, but we have some worried about this trip After all we are English not very good, and we are first time to Australia.
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Hello Trista! You did a wonderful job with this writing and should be very proud of yourself! I think you might be a little tired at the end of the writing because you made more mistakes in the last few sentences, but that's understandable. :) Great job forming verbs correctly and using the correct word order! One thing to work on is using a different preposition other than "on". "On" is NOT used to talk about location of places like cities or countries. We use "on" to talk mostly about days like "I will go to church on Sunday." Use "at" and "in" to talk about location: "We will live in Australia for a year." "I am staying at a friend's house in Australia." When in doubt, use "at."
Let me know if you have questions! Enjoy your trip to Australia!
-Lora
A trip to Australia
Next month, my husband and I are going to Australia for a holiday. First, we are going to visit friends on in Brisbane.We will live in their home for three days.On At Brisbane, we are going to go to the church on Sunday. Then we will visit the school where our friend’s children is located, go because we want to learn more about local education.On Wednesday, we are going to fly to Adelaida, it is in southern Australia.We will stay in there for there (maybe you meant to say "three"?) days.we (You should begin your new sentence here, so capitalize "We") are going to rent an a (only use "an" before words that begin with "a,e,i,o," and "u") small room on in (Generally, use "in" and "at" to talk about location and "on" to talk about days of the week, "on Sunday, on the 21st") Adelaide for to experience the location lift.we went to know if we will adapt to local life, and learn important information about the native people of Adelaide. Because we want to standing and living in stay and live there next year,and we went want ("went" is the past tense of "go" and "want" means that you desire or hope to do or have something) to get permanent residence as soon as possible. We know we will have a good time on in Australia, but we have some worried concerns about this trip After all we are our English is not very good, and we are first time to Australia (Instead say: "and we are going to Australia for the first time" OR "we are visiting Australia for the first time" OR "and this is our first time to Australia")..
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Hi, I'm not going to correct your entry because I'm leaning too jaja but I saw Australia and I couldn't help to get here. I'd like to visit Australia one of these days.
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可以帮我修改一下吗？谢谢
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