Could anyone correct my sentences? Thank you in advance!
I met the client for an interview on September 25th, 2018, and clarified that what is the role and scope of a doula. I also learned about their prenatal, birth and postpartum preferences and concerns. Client and her partner can speak a little English. The client was confident with the labor, because she is a dancing teacher, and she believes that she has strong core muscles and good tolerance for labor and delivery. I found out the client and her partner were much eager to know about newborn care and breastfeeding, so for our first prenatal visit, I prepared some pictures for letting them know the appearance of the newborn, and some videos about latch on. Partner was concerned about staying in the delivery room. He was afraid of blood and needles, so we discussed the situation in the delivery room and let him know we won’t see too much blood because it is not a surgery. We left the decision to the partner. For the second time prenatal visit, I provided informational support to them. I also accompanied them some visits to the birth center
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It would be much easier to correct the text if I knew who it was directed to and for what purpose exactly. In any event, I did the best I could.
I met the client for an interview on September 25th, 2018, and explained what my role as a doula would be. I also learned about their prenatal, birth and postpartum preferences and concerns. The client and her partner can speak a little English. The client was confident about dealing with labor because she is a dance teacher and has strong core muscles that will serve her well in labor and delivery. I found out the client and her partner were very eager to learn about newborn care and breastfeeding. So for our first prenatal visit, I prepared some pictures of newborns and some videos showing how the baby latches on. Her partner was concerned about being in the delivery room during the birth since he's afraid of blood and needles. To make him feel more comfortable, I talked about what a delivery is like and explained that, since it's not surgery, he wouldn't see much blood. We left it up to him to make the decision. For the second prenatal visit, I provided them with more support information. I also accompanied them to some visits at the birth center.
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