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Brazil flagFabiana Papacena
A report about a case This report is about a judgement that happened last month in a city around us. It was a criminal trespassing that a person, called Mr Medina, broke into Mrs Biron´s house and he intended to steal things of value, like TV, computers, câmeras etc. But the thief thought that the house was empty because he was knowing that the family should be traveling that week but there was an unpredictable situation and they didn´t go. The case was founded on the emotional distress upon the Biron´s family by the intrusion into their home by Mr. Medina. In the end of the judgement, the judge concluded that Mr. Medina couldn´t enter in a private property without consent of the owner because that´s a criminal offense and the sentence was guilty. The judge gave to Mr. Medina two types of punishment: one of them, is a fine for the damages that he caused to Biron´s family and the other punishment was 400 hours of community service. I think it will be more correct to give a punishment to Mr. Medina of deprivation of liberty because you can avoid this behavior in the future. In summarize, I feel that the community service is justifiable but not enough. I would appreciate if someone could correct my text.

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