Winter has arrived!!
Winter started a couple of days ago and it's freezing outside. And although I always complain about the heat in the summer and how I prefer the cold weather, this is too much people! The good part is the "winter food", the food that if it's eaten in summer it makes you sweat like a fake witness (Argentinian expression to say that you sweat a lot haha).
Hope you have a great day! Cheers!
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Winter has arrived!!
Winter started a couple of days ago and it's freezing outside. And although I always complain about the heat in the summer and how I prefer the cold weather, this is too much people! The good part is the "winter food", the food that if it's eaten in summer it makes you sweat like a fake false witness (Argentinian expression to say that you sweat a lot haha).
Hope you have a great day! Cheers!
Great, well done! :)
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Winter has arrived!!
Winter started a couple of days ago and it's freezing outside. Although I always complain about the heat in the summer and how I prefer the cold weather, this is too much people! The good part is that "winter food" is the kind of food, if eaten in summer, "makes you sweat like a fake witness" (an Argentinian expression that means you sweat a lot -- haha!!).
Hope you have a great day! Cheers!
I see you already have a couple of corrections, but I've changed a couple of additional things. The most significant change is in the last sentence. In English, we might use the word "nervous" instead of "fake," but I did not change it. Please let me know if you have any questions. (Note: I can really relate to the summer/winter dilemma!!!)
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Winter has arrived!!
Winter started a couple of days ago and it's freezing outside. And Although I always complain about the heat in the summer and how I prefer the cold weather, this is too much people! The good part is the "winter food", the food that if it's eaten in summer it makes you sweat like a fake witness (Argentinian expression to say that you sweat a lot haha).
Hope you have a great day! Cheers!
Well written! I tweaked a few things to make it sound better, but it works well how you wrote it too. And I love the expression fake witness (testigo falso?) I am going to start using that!
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¡excellent !
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