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Resumé, Help! Head line: I am a Chemist with good English skills. I have studied and practiced English since I was 15 years old. I used it a lot when I was studying my Bachelor's and working at a pharmaceutical industry by reading texts from FDA and USP. I want to use my knowledge and English skills to help you with your texts and clients, and spread their words into the Spanish speakers world. Experience: I learned and analyzed procedures. I improved new formats for calibrations and qualifications. I read some English texts from FDA and USP, understood them and explained them to my partners, so we could use the information and achieve our objectives easier. I advised some ideas to create a new nomenclature to identify Petri dishes whit samples of unknown bacteria and fungus.

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I'm not going to correct your resume since I assume you're actually trying to find a job with a US-based company. Try a format more like this:

Summary:
I am a chemist with strong English skills looking for a role at (insert company name here) helping achieve (insert business goals here) as a (insert role here). I am looking for an opportunity to use my knowledge and English skills to help drive your business in Spanish speaking world.

Key Skills:
  • Strong communication skills in English and Spanish
  • Pharmaceutical industry experience
  • Other skills here...

Experience:
  • Researcher, Mexico Pharmaceutical Company - Mexico City, Mexico (Jan 2018 - present)
  • Learned and analyzed procedures (more description here... what procedures, and specifically for what business goal)
  • Researched FDA and USP texts to (why? what business goal? why does this help a potential employer)
  • Developed a new nomenclature for unknown petri dish bacteria and fungus sampled (which accomplished which business goal?)
  • Job #2 here (sometimes if you don't have a second job/internship I've seen grads list their education-based experience here [e.g. as a "project"])

Education
  • Put your education here. If you don't have much job experience list out applicable skills and experience you obtained via your studies
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Resumé, Help!

Head line:
I am a Chemist with good English skills. I have studied and practiced English since I was from 15 years old of age. I used it a lot when I was studying for my Bachelor's and working at a pharmaceutical company industry (by reading texts from FDA and USP??) (What is FDA and USP? I would separate this this part into it's own sentence, as not doing that makes it sound as if you did nothing else to improve your English during that time). I want to use my knowledge and my English skills to help you with your texts and clients, and spread their words into the Spanish-speaking world. ("to the Spanish speakers of the world" would work here as well)

Experience:
I learned and analyzed procedures. I improved new formats for calibrations and qualifications. I read some English texts from FDA and USP (is this terminology specific to your field then?), understood them and explained them to my partners, so that we could use the information and in order to achieve our objectives more easily.
I advised some ideas (this wording is grammatically correct, but doesn't sound as good as it could for a resume. I am unsure of what to replace it with) to create a new nomenclature to identify petri (this is not a proper noun, and so should not be capitalized) dishes with samples of unknown bacteria and fungus.

Good work! My corrections are based on what sounds best to me personally in my head. Your English isn't bad at all. Are you using this to apply for jobs in the United States? I would think bullet points would be seen as a more common format here, especially under the experience portion. Quick and to the point! But I am not a resume expert to be honest, that's just what I've seen in resumes as an American. Also, the tilde on the end of resume is not needed in English.
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ok, thanks a lot, anything else you could adveces me?
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I would avoid using 'I' on the resume. I hardly see it being used on professional resume. Also, they use bullet point. Experience: * Learned analyzed procedures. * Improved new formats for calibrations and qualifications. * Read some English texts from FDA and USP, understood them and explained them to my partners, so we could use the information and achieve our objectives easier. * Advised some ideas to create a new nomenclature to identify Petri dishes whit samples of unknown bacteria and fungus.

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