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B2 writing skills I have the task to write an email for the college Dear colleagues, Please find attached document about the process for accounting revenue and accounting policies in company. We would like mention following highlights: - Company produce the packaging, all the production is made by the orders in advance, finished products could not be sold to the other client. - Company does not have agreements with more than one performance obligation We conclude, the revenue should be accounted on the period, all the inventories accounted under local legislation for the period end should be recognized as revenue. if you need additional information, please don't hesitate to contact me. I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter. Thanks in advance Best regards, XXX

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[It might require knowledge of accounting to understand it perfectly, but here's how I think it be. I have changed some things to give it a more formal tone.]

B2 writing skills

I have been given the task of writing an email for my college

Dear colleagues,
Attached is the process document that describes both the revenue accounting process and the accounting policies followed by our company.
We would like to draw your attention to the following points:
  • The company produces the packaging.
  • All production is done so in advance.
  • Finished products can not be sold to other clients.
  • The company does not have agreements in place regarding performance obligations. [It was not clear what this sentence was supposed to say. My version probably changes the meaning entirely.]

Finally, the revenue should be accounted for by the end of each period, and all inventory must be accounted for under local legislation for that period and be recognized as revenue.

Should you need additional information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
We would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter.
Thanks in advance
Best regards,
[Name]
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B2 writing skills

I have the a task to write an email for the college.

Dear colleagues,
Please find an attached document about the processes for accounting revenue and as well as accounting policies in the company.

We would to like mention the following highlights:
- The company produces the packaging, and all the production is made by the orders in advance. Finished products could not cannot be sold to the other another client.
- The company does not have agreements with requiring more than one performance obligation.

We In conclusion, the revenue should be accounted for on the period, and all the inventories accounted for under local legislation for the period end should be recognized as revenue.

if you need For additional information, please don't hesitate to contact me.
I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter.
Thanks in advance.
Best regards,
XXX


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