170th day 2019
It's Wednesday and this is my plan for today. I've just had fried eggs for breakfast and before I drink a coffee I am going to do some English. Today I'm seeing the dentist. She is going to treat my two teeth. I usually feel not great after anesthetization, so I'm not sure if I go to work on my new flat. Maybe I will stay home to practice English.
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170th day 2019
It's Wednesday and this is my plan for today. I've just had fried eggs for breakfast and before I drink a coffee I am going to do some English. Today I'm seeing the dentist. She is going to treat two of my teeth. [1] I usually feel not great after anesthetization, so I'm not sure if I'll work on my new flat. Maybe I will stay home to practice English.
[1] "my two teeth" suggests that you only have two teeth
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170th day 2019
It's Wednesday and this is my plan for today. I've just had fried eggs for breakfast and before I drink a coffee I am going to do some English. Today I'm seeing the dentist. She is going to treat two of my teeth. I usually don't feel great after anesthetization, so I'm not sure if I'll go to work on my new flat. Maybe I will stay home to practice English.
As John said "my two teeth" sounds like you only have two teeth, so changed it to "two of my teeth". Otherwise very good, no grammatical errors except missing the the I'll. I also rearranged the sentence to make it sound more like a native speaker.
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