Municipal office
Today I went to municipal office.
I went to reissue because my passport has expired.
I want to go to Australia in August or October.
But I have no friends to go with me.
I’m very sad. I’m lonely woman.
If there is no one to go with me, I will go alone.
When I told my mother about it, she was anxious.
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Municipal office
Today I went to the municipal office.
I went to reissue renew my passport because my passport it has expired.
I want to go to Australia in either August or October.
But I have no friends to go with me.
I’m very sad. I’m a lonely woman.
If there is no one to go with me, I will go alone.
When I told my mother about it, she was anxious.
Good job with your writing. It might be better to write it as a single paragraph, rather than individual lines. I retyped your sentences below into a single paragraph.
"Today, I went to the municipal office (City Hall) in order to renew my passport as it has expired. I want to go to Australia in either August or October. However, I have no friends to come with; so I'm a sad, lonely woman. If there is no one to come with me, I will go alone. When I told my mother, she was anxious."
I hope you will have someone to go with and have a great time. I've never been, but it sounds like a great place. :)
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