I miss my friend
When I was a kid, I lived in Kamchatka and I had a friend, Alex. Our friendship was started when we were 8 years old. His mother didn't like her son have walked with me. She phoned my mother and told: "when my son walks with your Vitya, he comes back all in shit". It was true) We had a lot of adventures at that time!
Once we decided to run away to Alaska. Alex should have gone to me and say 'meow'. Like Huckleberry ) But he was caught by his mom. She went to my door with him and said 'meow'. In order to evidence our plan is bullshit and his best friend Vitek is sleeping. I knew about it from my mom in the morning.
Then I left Kamchatka when I was 14. There were so much in my life. But there was no friend like Alex. I missed him too much. I told my little daughter many stories about my best friend Alex and our adventures)
We met again after 30 years. His speech, his favorite music, his interests - all this have not changed in him since our childhood. Now we are living in the same city. I can phone him anytime, but I never do it.
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I miss my friend
When I was a kid, I lived in Kamchatka and I had a friend, Alex. Our friendship was started when we were 8 years old. His mother didn't like her son walking with me. She phoned my mother and told her: "when my son walks with your Vitya, he comes back covered in shit". It was true) We had a lot of adventures at that time!Once we decided to run away to Alaska. Alex should have gone to me and say 'meow'. Like Huckleberry ) But he was caught by his mum. She came to my door with him and said 'meow'. In order to evidence show us, our plan is was bullshit and his best friend Vitek is sleeping. I knew about it from my mom in the morning.
Then I left Kamchatka when I was 14. There I were had so much many friends in my life, but there was no friend like Alex. I missed him too much a lot. I told my little young daughter many stories about my best friend Alex and our adventures)
We met again after 30 years. His speech, his favourite music, his interests - all this have had not changed in him since our childhood. Now we are living /Now we live in the same city. I can phone /call him anytime, but I never do it.
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I miss my friend
When I was a kid, I lived in Kamchatka and I had a friend, Alex. Our friendship was started when we were 8 years old. His mother didn't like her son walking with me. She phoned my mother and told her: "when my son walks with your Vitya, he comes back covered in shit". It was true) We had a lot of adventures at that time!
Once we decided to run away to Alaska. Alex should have gone to me? was planning to come to me and say 'meow'. Like Huckleberry ) But he was caught by his mom (But his mom caught him). She came to my door with him and said 'meow'. In order show us our plan was bullshit and his best friend Vitek is sleeping (who is Vitek??). I found out about it from my mom in the morning.
But there was no friend like Alex. I missed him alot. I told my young daughter many stories about my best friend Alex and our adventures. We met again after 30 years. His speech, his favorite music, his interests - all this had not changed (None of his had changed) in him since our childhood. Now we are living (we live) in the same city. I can phone him anytime, but I never do it.
In general, try not to use the words "shit" and "bullshit" uncless you are quoting someone.
For 'shit" you can say, "poop". And in your case, instead of "bullshit," you can say, "our plan was crap/nonsensical/rubbish/terrible/stupid"
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Thank you David and Sofia!
David, about your question. There was nothing obscene sir! Just downpour, mud, puddles and two stuck bicycles)
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There are already excellent edits and suggestions to this very interesting and well-written composition. I remain puzzled about one thing though. How did the guy get splattered (?) with anything on a regular basis, just by going for a walk with a girl? This would need a bit of elaboration.
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A very beautiful story, you still remember your childhood friend.
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