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Some questions and answers. Please correct if you have noticed mistakes. Thanks. Q. Is money important? A. Yes it is important for me to live. And for most of people I think. Q. Do people in your country save their money? A. Yes they do. As far as I know, they save their money more than the people in the US or UK. It is because of the anxiety for their future. For example pensions. The amount we get after retirement is getting less and less because of declining of birthrate. We are going to have less people to pay pension. Q. What sort of things young people spend their money on? A. In the case of my friends, mid 20’s of single girls, they spend their money on their cloths, social activities like eating out, having drinks, traveling and some hobbies. I guess boys also do it on their cloths, shoes, and probably video games. So basically they do it for themselves. Q. How do you feel when you don't have enough money to buy something you want? A. I would feel sad. But I don't recall when is the last time that happened to me. I normally buy things which are affordable. I don't really want something very expensive. If it was a little bit over my budget but I really want, I would save money for a while and come back when I got enough money. Any corrections are welcome! Thank you!

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Some questions and answers. Please correct if you have noticed mistakes. Thanks.

Q. Is money important?
A. Yes, it is important for me to live. And for most of people, I think. *(see my comment below)

Q. Do people in your country save their money?
A. Yes, they do. As far as I know, they save their money more than the people in the US or UK. It is because of the anxiety for their future. For example: pensions. The amount we get after retirement is getting becoming less and less because of the declining of birthrate. We are going to have less fewer people to pay into pensions.

Q. What sort of things do young people spend their money on?
A. In the case of my friends, mid-20’s of single girls, they spend their money on: their clothes (or you can say "clothing"), social activities like eating out and having drinks, travelling and some hobbies. I guess boys also do spend it on their clothes, shoes, and probably video games. So, basically they do it for themselves.

Q. How do you feel when you don't have enough money to buy something you want?
A. I would feel sad. But I don't recall when is the last time that happened to me. I normally buy things which that are affordable. I don't really want something very too expensive. If it was were a little bit over my budget but something I really want, I would save my money for a while and come back when I got saved enough money.

Any corrections are welcome! Thank you!

Great job! I share your concern with whether pensions will be available when I'm older.

*Normally, it's not advised to start a sentence with "and" or "because", so either we use other conjunctions in their place, or we can combine the two sentences together.

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