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Soon will be my birthday and I have to celebrate it at the office with my co-workers. Honestly I don't feel comfortable with that cuz I don't like being in center of everyone's attention. Anyway I plan to buy some food and wine. It is kind of tradition at our office that everyone brings some food and we eat it together. I'm from the country Georgia and we have tradition to say toast during the feast and I'm really not good at saying toast that is actually the real reason why I feel not convenient about celebrating my birthday at the office.
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Thanks Ilene)
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It will soon be my birthday and I have to celebrate it at the office, with my co-workers. I honestly don't feel comfortable with that because I don't like being the centre of attention. Anyway I plan to buy some food and wine. It's kind of a tradition at our office that everyone brings some food and we eat together. I'm from the country of Georgia and we have a tradition of proposing a toast during the feast and I'm not really good at proposing a toast. That's the real reason why I don't feel comfortable about celebrating my birthday at the office.
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Could you correct me , please?
Konstantin
Jun 14, 2019
English
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Soon IT will be my birthday and I have to celebrate it at the office with my co-workers. Honestly, I don't feel comfortable with that BECAUSE I don't like being in THE center of everyone's attention. Anyway, I plan to buy some food and wine. It is kind of A tradition at our office that everyone brings some food and we eat it together. I'm from the country Georgia, and we have A tradition to say A toast during the feast, and I'm really not good at toastS.(T)that is actually the real reason why I DON'T feel COMFORTABLE celebrating my birthday at the office.
Hi Konstantin,
This paragraph was pretty good! Sorry about giving the toast; I don't know how to help you there. Usually, in the US, co-workers give a toast about the birthday person. Good luck--and Happy Birthday! Ilene
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