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Coachella Music Festival Have you ever attended a live show where you can witness how your favourite bands and artists perform in front of you? A great opportunity to experience so is going to Coachella. This music festival is two-weeks long and it offers a variety of activities apart from the musical performance, such as contests, meetings and so on. In particular, it is worth mentioning how incredible this year’s show was. The main artist who led the Coachella stage was Ariana Grande. She gave the audience a high quality concert where she showed how poweful and grounded she is. Not only was Ariana in the spotlight, but there were also a huge number of guests who joined Ariana in the show. Given that many of the artists had not released any piece of music in decades, Coachella’s audience were absolutely delighted to see how those artists had grown musically. Nonetheless, the show had a few weaknesses. One of them was that the venue was over-crowded, which had a negative impact on the turnout. In addition, had the screens of the stage been enlarged, attenders would have enjoyed the show more, particularly those who were located in the furthest rows. To the untrained eye, the technical mistakes that were made while switching a song to another would have been overlooked, as interludes were short-lasting. I would strongly recommend to go to Coachella to those who enjoy music festivals. This year’s feedback was outstandingly good. Without a shadow of a doubt, it is a show not to be missed.

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Coachella Music Festival

Have you ever attended a live show where you can witness how your favourite bands and artists performing in front of you? A great opportunity to experience that is going to Coachella. This music festival is two weeks long. Apart from the musical performance, it offers a variety of activities, such as contests, meet-and-greets and so on.
In particular, it is worth mentioning how incredible this year’s festival was. The lead artist on the main Coachella stage was Ariana Grande. She gave the audience a high quality performance where she showed how powerful and grounded she is. Not only was Ariana in the spotlight, but there were also a huge number of guests who joined Ariana in the show. Given that many of the artists had not released any piece of music in decades, Coachella’s audience was absolutely delighted to see how those artists had grown musically.

Nonetheless, the show had a few weaknesses. One of them was that the venue was overcrowded, which had a negative impact on the turnout. In addition, had the screens of the stage been larger, attenders would have enjoyed the show more, particularly those who were located in the furthest rows. To the untrained eye, the technical mistakes that were made while switching a song to another would have been overlooked, as interludes were short-lasting.

I would strongly recommend to go to Coachella to those who enjoy music festivals. This year’s feedback was outstandingly good. Without a shadow of a doubt, it is a show not to be missed.

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