Medellín
Medellín is a very active city, because there are many things to do and have a good public transport to move around the city and its surroundings, I have some advice for people who want to visit Medellin, if you want to have a view of the city, you can go to lookout las palmas, here you can enjoy the paisa gastronomy and have a panoramic view of the city so you can locate yourself, you can also find different cheap relaurastes in the paseo del rio, this place is located next to the industriales metro station, but If you want to relax, you should go to Arví Park. It is an incribe place full of vegetation and streams, where you can take walks and enjoy nature. santa helena a place you usually find in the guitebook, but the tourists only limit themselves to know the statue of the silletero, I recommend to know more the town, because the houses are so beautiful, besides ,that they are surrounded by the nature, with many flowers and species of birds , you can simply get up and have a coffee accompanied by a butterfly, but if you prefer to go shopping Itagüí is the place indicated, because there are many stores and malls.
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Medellín
Medellín is a very busy city. There are many things to do and there is a good public transport/transportation system to move around the city and its surroundings. I have some advice for people who want to visit Medellin. If you want to have a view of the city, you can go to the lookout Las Palmas, where you can enjoy the paisa (not an English word) gastronomy and have a panoramic view of the city so you can orient yourself. You can also find different cheap restaurants in the Paseo del Rio, this place which is located next to the Industriales metro station. If you want to relax, you should go to Arví Park. It is an incribe(not an English word) incredible place full of vegetation and streams, where you can take walks and enjoy nature. Santa Helena is a place you usually find in the guidebooks, but the tourists only limit themselves to seeing/visiting the statue of the Silletero. I recommend getting to know the town , because the houses are so beautiful, besides ,that they are surrounded by the nature, with many flowers and species of birds. You can simply get up and have a coffee accompanied by a butterfly. If you prefer to go shopping, Itagüí is the place to go, because there are many stores and malls.
Notes:
We usually use the word "active" for a person, not a place, so I changed it to 'busy" which you can use for a person or a place.
You can see that I made a lot of little changes related to capital letters (all places are capitalized, including names of metro stations!) and also commas and periods. Look at your original entry and you will see that you have only TWO sentences!!!! You need to read your sentences out loud, and put periods where they should be (you run out of breath and/or hear your voice drop -- that's usually an indication of the end of a sentence.)
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