Something about me and the ity where Ilive
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My name is Alan and twenty years ago I celebrated my thirtieth birthday so,I have a lot of experience being young
Although I was born in a town in the south of Spain called Jerez and well known for its wines, I currently live in a city on Mediterranean sea called Marbella.The main businesses of this city are related to tourism and,much of them, with luxury tourism.It's a place with many,perhaps too many,hotels ,shops and expensive restaurants,surrounded by golf courses and luxorious residential areas.It has also a formidable marina,almost always full of yachts,and some quite acceptable beaches.
I do not like much this city but I do not hate it either, I live here mainly for work reasons and because it is near, almost in the center, of many other places that I really like.
If you get tired of the sea, you have the mountain quite close and, on it, some of the most beautiful villages in southern Spain.
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Something about me and the ity where Ilive
Hello.My name is Alan and twenty years ago I celebrated my thirtieth birthday, so I have a lot of experience being young.
Although I was born in a town in the south of Spain called Jerez, which is well known for its wines, I currently live in a Mediterranean city called Marbella.The main businesses of this city are related to tourism, mostly luxury tourism. It's a place with many, perhaps too many, hotels, shops and expensive restaurants. It is surrounded by golf courses and luxurious residential areas. It has also a formidable (you could use 'large' or 'famous', but formidable is not really correct) marina, almost always full of yachts, and it is surrounded by some quite acceptable nice beaches.
I do not like this city much, but I do not hate it either. I live here mainly for work reasons and because it is near to and almost in the center of, many other places that I really like.
If you get tired of the sea, you have the mountain quite close and, on it are some of the most beautiful villages in southern Spain.
Mostly good but try to not use too many commas. You can make your sentences less complicated! They will be easier to understand in English and easier for you to write.
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