Public transports
Nowadays, the way to travel has changed due to many rasons such as the new technologies or the cycle paths, very popular in some cities, belong others.
On the one hand, thank's to new technologies we can to check in our mobile phone apps when the bus will arrive, why we can list our travel. On the other hand cycle paths encourage us cycle to work, so, we could be healthier and happier while the pollution is reduced.
About people's think, there are people who think that the cities need more buses while there are people who think that we must use the cycle paths, in spite of this way to travel could be dangerous. At the future, people, companies and the governement should work together to do better people`s life.
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Public transports ('Transport' is always plural)
Nowadays, the way to travel has changed due to many reasons, such as new technologies or the cycle paths, which are very popular in some cities, belong others.On the one hand, Thanks (you don't need an apostrophe in 'thanks', they are for abbreviations or possessions) to new technologies we can to check our mobile phone apps to see when the bus will arrive, and why we can plan our travel. On the other hand, cycle paths encourage us cycle to work, so, we could be healthier and happier while the pollution is reduced. ('On the one hand/on the other hand' is used for creating an argument. You can use 'also' if you want, but you don't need anything at the beginning of these sentences.)
About people's think, Some people think that the cities need more buses, while there are other people who think that we must use the cycle paths, in spite despite this way of travel being dangerous. In the future, people, companies and the government should work together to do make people's lives better.
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