It's an outstanding piece of writing. I cannot think of one thing you could change, add or subtract. Bravo!

I do believe in your sentences

For many of us, we believe that we need good luck for good things to happen. Nevertheless, I think that for good luck to happen, we need to do good. No one that makes evil or bad choices can have good luck in this life. If everything that we do is good and kind, then we can get far in life. Before making a bad choice, think about it a second time. I hope this better explains what you have written. Keep it up Jose :-)