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Travelling in japan I presented a flight to Japan to my family because my dad had birthday. So My family and I visited to Japan a month ago. But I forgot that my dad became older than he was some time ago. We walked a lot and my dad didn't handle it very well. He is not as young as he used to be. I'm so sorry for my dad. So, when we came back home, I said, "I'm sorry that you had to walk a lot. I should have to choose another country. If we went to another country, It would be hard less." But my dad replied, "No, I couldn't go there in a few years. but now I'm Okay. we made some great memories in Japan. " :)

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Travelling to Japan

My family and I visited Japan for my dad's birthday a month ago. We walked a lot and my dad didn't handle it very well. He is not as young as he used to be. I felt sorry for my dad, so I decided it was time for us to go back home. I told him, "I'm sorry that you had to walk a lot. Maybe it would've been easier for you if we visited some other country." My dad replied, "It's alright, we made some great memories in Japan."
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Travel to Japan.
I presented a flight to Japan to my family cuz my dad had a birthday. So I went to Japan with my family a month ago.
But I forgot that my dad became older than he was some time ago.
We walked a lot so my dad was very hard during long walks.
I'm so sorry for my dad. So, when we came back home, I said, "I'm sorry that you had to walk a lot. I should have to choose another country. If we went to another country, It would be hard less."
But my dad said, "No, I could't go there in a few years , but now I'm Okay. It was so good impression. " :)
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Please corrtet my writing 😭
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Hi Hanna☺️☺️☺️
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