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ı am a fan girl Hi guys. İs there any fan girl or fan boy one between you? For example me, I love Alexander Rybak. He is very good playing violin. I saw him in Eurovision-2009 first time and I admired to him. After that, I searched his other songs. I fond "OAH", "Europe's Skies" and "Roll With The Wind". This songs is very beautiful. There endeared violin to me. İf you don't know yet, I suggest listen to Alexander Rybak's songs. You will love, I'm a sure.😋

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I am a fan girl

Hi guys! Are there any fan girls or fan boys here? Me for example, I love Alexander Rybak. He is a very good violinist. I saw him in Eurovision 2009 for the first time and have admired him since. After that, I searched for his other songs and found "OAH," "Europe's Skies," and "Roll With The Wind." Those songs are very beautiful. They made me love the violin. If you don't know him yet, I suggest you listen to Alexander Rybak's songs. You will love them too, I'm sure! 😋
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thanks a lot! some rules are not come to mine, i'm sorry about for this issue :(
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(Hi Merv, I made a few corrections below.) İs there any fan girl or fan boy one between you? (In the U.S. we call a fan girl or fan boy=A girl crush or boy crush) (For example: We would ask - Hi guys, Does anyone have a famous girl crush or boy crush?) For example me, I love Alexander Rybak. He is very good playing violin. (He is very good (at) playing the violin.) I saw him in Eurovision-2009 first time and I admired to him. (I saw him in Eurovision-2009 (for the) first time and I admire him.) After that, I searched his other songs. I fond "OAH", "Europe's Skies" and "Roll With The Wind". (I found "OAH",) This songs is very beautiful. (This song (is)very beautiful or These songs (are) very beautiful. There endeared violin to me. İf you don't know yet, (If you don't know of them yet) I suggest listen (listening) to Alexander Rybak's songs. You will love, I'm a sure.(I'm sure.)😋 (Merv, The structure of your story is very good. Alexander Rybak is very talented. Thanks for sharing) ***Kito N****

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