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My next holidays. My family and I have a sailing boat and every year, we plan a trip around the Mediterranean Sea. On July 1st. we will leave Menorca. We want to arrive to Greece with our boat. First, we want to go to Tunissia, we will depart from Mahon and our first stop will be in Carloforte, a very small and pretty island in the south of Sardegna. It will take us around a day and a half to get there from Menorca so we will rest there for some hours before reaching Tunissia. We love fishing and every time we go from Menorca to Carloforte we take three or four tunas, once we get to the harbour we like to go to the fish market and sell the tunas there, it would be impossible for us to eat all of them. My little brothers love swimming and the beach, they could swim all day long, sometimes I think they are half fishes. Last year we went to the Ionians Islands in Greece, those are gorgeous islands too. When you travel like this you can't really make plans because you are always depending on the weather and you never know when or where you will arrive. We like that kind of life, we don't have to care much about laundry, clothes, cleaning the house or things like those. Therefore my next holidays I will go where the wind decides to take me and I am sure, like every year, my holidays will be great. See you some place around there.

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My next holidays.

My family and I have a sailing boat and every year, we plan a trip around the Mediterranean Sea.

On July 1st. we will leave Menorca. We want to sail arrive to Greece with our boat. First, we want to go to Tunissia, we will depart from Mahon and our first stop will be on Carloforte, a very small and pretty island in the south of Sardinia Sardegna. It will take us around a day and a half to get there from Menorca so we will rest there for some hours before sailing to reaching Tunisia.

We love fishing and every time we go from Menorca to Carloforte we catch take three or four tunas, once we get to the harbour we like to go to the fish market and sell the tunas there, it would be impossible for us to eat all of them.

My little brothers love swimming and playing on the beach, they could swim all day long, sometimes I think they are half fishes.

Last year we went to the Ionians Islands in Greece, those are gorgeous islands too. When you travel like this you can't really make plans because you are always depending on the weather and you never know when or where you will arrive. We like that kind of life, we don't have to care much about laundry, clothes, cleaning the house or things like that those.

Therefore during my next holidays I will go where the wind takes me decides to take me and I am sure, like every year, my holidays will be great. See you some place around there.
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My next holidays.

My family and I have a sailing boat and every year, we plan a trip around the Mediterranean Sea.

On July 1st,. we will leave Menorca. We want to arrive travel to Greece with on our boat. First, we want to go to Tunissia., We will depart from Mahon and our first stop will be in Carloforte, a very small and pretty island in the south of Sardegna. It will take us around a day and a half to get there from Menorca, so we will rest there for some a few hours before reaching (setting sail to/leaving for/travelling to) Tunissia. (I'm changing the meaning of the sentence ending here, and I'm not sure if you really mean that it takes you a few hours more than usual to reach Tunissia because of the rest that you took. However, when one says they've rested before doing something, it's the beginning of that thing, not the end....and if it's that you've reached Tunissia, you've ended your journey to that destination, so reading the original sentence feels like you've skipped a step).

We love fishing and every time we go from Menorca to Carloforte we take three or four tunas., Once we get to the harbour we like to go to the fish market and sell the tunas there, as it would be impossible for us to eat all of them.

My little brothers love swimming and the beach;, they could swim all day long., Sometimes I think they are half fishes (can't even explain why "fish" and not "fishes"...it just seems right, sorry)

Last year we went to the Ionians Islands in Greece, and/; those are gorgeous islands too. When you travel like this you can't really make plans because you are always depending on the weather and you never know when or where you will arrive. We like that kind of life., We don't have to care much about laundry, clothes, cleaning the house or things like thatthose (honestly, was battling between "things like that" or "things like these"....but I think "things like that" sounds a little more natural).

Therefore, for my next holidays, I will go where the wind decides to take me and I am sure, like every year, my holidays will be great. See you some place around there.

Very nice article!

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