A Letter to Peter: essay practice
Dear Peter,
Words can't express my sincere excitement on hearing that you've won the “Beautiful Campus” photography competition. I'm writing to give you my congratulations.
As far as I'm concerned, winning this competition is extremely difficult, resulting from that many works are well prepared. However, there is no doubt that your masterpiece deserves the award most. Not only is your work fabulous and finely-organized. I, but also all the charming points of our school are thoroughly shown which absolutely makes it distinguished.
Lastly, it would be so kind of you if you were willing to share some precious experience on photography. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua.
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A Letter to Peter: essay practice
Dear Peter,Words can't express my sincere excitement about learning that you've won the “Beautiful Campus” photography competition. I'm writing to give you my congratulations.
I believe/In my opinion winning this competition is extremely difficult because a lot of works are well prepared. However, there is no doubt that your masterpiece deserves the award most. Not only is your work fabulous and finely-organized, but also all the charming points of our school are thoroughly shown which absolutely makes it distinguished.
Lastly, it would be so kind of you if you shared some precious experience of photography. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua.
Well done, good style of writing!
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