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Please check my sentences I’d appreciate any corrections. The line graph illustrates the population of lndia and China from the year 2000 to the prediction for increasing to the year 2050. China was 1,250millions in the 2000 that it was higher than India shows 1,000millions. The two lines are going to be crossed in the 2030 that the population will be 1,450millions, after that India will surpass China from the 2030 onwards. In the 2050,the gap of two countries will show that it will be 200millions which India is going to be exceeding China. The population of India will be growing to 600millions in 50 years. In contrast, China is not going to have a big difference at the same terms. The line chart describes that the population of India from the 2000 to 2050 is constantly increasing although China does not represent the steep changes at the same period. Thank you for reading.

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Please check my sentences

I’d appreciate any corrections.



The line graph illustrates the population of lndia and China from the year 2000 to the prediced tion for increase ing to the year 2050.
China was 1,250 millions in the 2000 that and it was higher than India shows at 1,000 millions.
The two lines are going to be crossed in the year 2030 that when the populations will be 1,450 millions, after that India will surpass China from the year 2030 onwards. In By the year 2050,the gap of between the two countries will show  grow how that it will be to 200 millions which with India is going to be exceeding China. The population of India will be growing to by 600 millions in 50 years. In contrast, the population of China is not going to have a big difference at the same terms.
The line chart describes that the population of India from the 2000 to 2050 is constantly increasing although China does not represent have the steep changes at through the same period.




Thank you for reading.


Good job.  Very Interesting.

I tried to imagine what the graphs look like.  I believe I understood what you were describing.  Let me know if you have any questions.


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Okay that great to hear

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