Number of books read at the Burnaby public library. Please, could somebody correct it? :)
The line graph illustrates the amount of books read by males and females at Burnaby public library in a period of four years, from 2011 to 2014.
Overall, one can clearly see that the number of books that have been read increased steadily for both genders troughout this period.
In regards to the amount of books read by men, it was roughly 2.500 in the year 2011. In a one-year period, the number increased steadily to about 4.000 books. Then, from 2012 to 2014, there was an upward trend, reaching the maximum peak in 2014, at roughly 14.000 books.
In contrast, females were reading 2.000 books more than males in the year 2011. The amount of literature read was rising until 2013, reaching a peak at of approximatelly 9.000 books. From 2013 to 2014, the number decreased sharply, being 8.000 the amount of books read.
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Number of books read at the Burnaby public library. Please, could somebody correct it? :)
The line graph illustrates the amount of books read by males and females at Burnaby public library in a period of four years, from 2011 to 2014.Overall, one can clearly see that the number of books that have been read increased steadily for both genders throughout this period.
In regards to the amount of books read by men, it was roughly 2,500 in the year 2011. In a one-year period, the number increased steadily to about 4,000 books. Then, from 2012 to 2014, there was an upward trend, reaching the maximum (alternatively peak) in 2014, at roughly 14,000 books.
In contrast, females were reading 2,000 books more than males in the year 2011. The amount of literature read was rising until 2013, reaching a peak at of approximately 9,000 books. From 2013 to 2014, the number decreased sharply, being 8,000 the amount of books read.
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The line graph illustrates the number of books read by males and females at Burnaby public library in a four year period (from 2011 to 2014). Overall, one can clearly see that the number of books read increased steadily for both genders throughout this period. With regards to the number of books read by men, the figure was roughly 2,500 in the year 2011. In that year, the number increased steadily to about 4,000 books. Then, from 2012 to 2014, there was an upward trend, peaking in 2014 at roughly 14,000 books. In contrast, females read 2,000 books more than males in the year 2011. The number of literature books read rose until 2013, peaking at of approximately 9,000 books. From 2013 to 2014, the number of books read decreased sharply, falling to 8,000 in total. ____________ 145 words
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