My holiday
On the weekend I went to my grandma house with my cousin ,I'm so excited .I wondered about will the geese still there?since last time I went to grandma house I saw a lot of gosling there.finally,I arrived at my grandma house ,I play a lot of games.I wish next time I can go to grandma house again.
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My holiday
On the weekend, I went to my grandma’s house with my cousin. I'm so excited .I wondered about will the geese still be there?since The last time I went to grandmas house I saw a lot of gosling there. Finally, I arrived at my grandma’s house. I played a lot of games. I wish next time I can can’t wait to go to grandma’s house again.0
My holiday
On the weekend I went to my grandma house with my cousin ,I'm so excited .I wondered about will the geese still there?since last time I went to grandma house I saw a lot of gosling there.finally,I arrived at my grandma house ,I play a lot of games.I wish next time I can go to grandma house again.This is how I'd word it. I'll let you read it and see if it means the same thing as what you were intending:
On the weekend, I went to my grandmother's house with my cousin. I was so excited! I wonder if the geese will still be there? <<<2ND SENTENCE I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU ARE SAYING. IT IS THE HIGHLIGHTED SENTENCE>>> After arriving at my grandmother's house, I played many games. I can't wait to go to my grandmother's house again!
NOTE: Your second sentence is confusing to me. Are you trying to say that you've seen a lot of baby geese during the time you weren't at your grandmother's house? Or are you saying that you saw a lot of geese the first time you went there? I have no clue what this 2nd sentence is saying.
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