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Fortune teller I have visited a fortune teller many years ago. She was in a rented place, sitting in a small room. When I entered she asked me if I played the piano. She explained that she heard a piano just when I entered there. She was right, I used to play the piano. She predicted that I would find a man (that I knew) in his mourning situation. Never happened till now. She also told me that I should go out from the protection circle. In that moment, she was right, I did it a couple of years later.

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Fortune teller

I have  visiteded  a fortune teller many years ago. She was in a rented place, sitting in a small room. When I entered she asked me if I played the piano. She explained that she heard a piano just when I entered there. She was right, I used to play the piano. She predicted that I would find a man (that I knew) in his mourning situation. when he was in mourning. Never happened till now It hasn't happened yet. She also told me that I should go out from the protection circle. move out of my safety zone. (Serena, I wasn't exactly sure what you meant here. If you meant moving away from an overprotective family, then you could say 'move away from my protecting family'. But If you meant you needed to be more confident, less cautious then you could write what I suggest)  In that  she was right, I did it a couple of years later.
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Fortune teller

I have visited a fortune teller many years ago. She was in a rented place, sitting in a small room. When I entered she asked me if I played the piano. She explained that she heard a piano just when I entered there. She was right, I used to play the piano. She predicted that I would find a man (that I knew) in his mourning situation. It never happened, till until now. She also told me that I should go out from leave the protection circle. In that moment, she was right, I did it a couple of years later. I don't understand what you want to say here. What was she right about and what did you do a couple of years later exactly? I would try re-wording this.

I like your story. The detail you added in the second sentence added a visionary element to the narrative. In the first sentence, have, is not appropriate. You might be able to say, "I had visited a fortune teller many years ago" but I think it sounds most natural without it.

Anyway, best of luck. Keep up the great work!
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Fortune teller

Many years ago I visited a fortune teller . She was in a rented place, sitting in a small room. When I entered she asked me if I played the piano. She explained that she heard a piano just when I entered there. She was right, I used to play the piano. She predicted that I would find a man (that I already knew) in his mourning situation when he was in mourning. Never happened till now But that hasn't happen yet. She also told me that I should go out from the protection circle my confort zone. In that moment, she was right, I did it a couple of years later after that.
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aah that's cool

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